Guest Post: Beth Mayer on Short Stories

ICYMI, May is Short Story Month. To round out these 31 days of love for fiction in short form, Beth Mayer guest posts on the challenges, the risks, and the joy in the genre.


On Writing Short Stories: Deliberately Entering (and Resolving!) a New & Troubling Dream

“The meaning of a story has to be embodied in it, has to be made concrete in it. A story is a way to say something that can’t be said in any other way, and it takes every word in the story to say what the meaning is. You tell a story because a statement would be inadequate.” ~ Flannery O’Connor, “Writing Short Stories”

Beth Mayer

Working deeply with the stories in my collection (WE WILL TELL YOU OTHERWISE, forthcoming, Black Lawrence Press) over many years allowed me to see why writers say the short story form is difficult. The more I write, the better I get. And? The richer my stories become, the more complex my work revising them. And I have grown to understand how, when I give myself permission, a short story determines itself. 

Writing a short story is—for me—the only way to say something that “can’t be said in any other way.” First, though, I need to discover—and understand—that particular “something.”

From generation to publication, the writing process takes courage. If I stall, material accumulates. Writing is patient and much of what happens is unconscious. Though it need not be confessional or (please, no!) replace a good therapist, Tennessee Williams knew that our creative work is often “emotionally autobiographical.” I am sad and write a story called “Blue.” Struggle with perfectionism? Write “Good Enough.” Face an old addiction, yet again? A story called “Beholden.”

My process is decidedly old-school. To begin, I draft stories in longhand. Then I type-up what I have—making changes as I go—and hit print. With a pen that I love, I jot brackets and notes in the margins. I make messy lists that help me gather and contain a barrage of thoughts. With care, I label places where I plan to move “chunks” of text around.

Mayer: Short stories are worth the risk; image: cracked geode full of clear crystals

Writer and thinker Rollo May, in The Courage to Create, discusses the anxiety one feels when a breakthrough is near; he quotes Picasso: “Every act of creation is first of all an act of destruction.” On a summer day near our cabin, this idea manifests when my daughter spends her precious dollar at the “Five & Dime” on a rock that might be a geode. When I explain that she won’t know until she cracks it open, she tells me that it’s worth the risk. If I edit my stories too early, it is like polishing a rock until the surface shines. But I will never know what might be shimmering inside had I taken a hammer to it.

(Geode photo credit: MGSpiller on VisualHunt / CC BY-SA)

There are times I know that a story is not working. Maybe it’s an ending that just feels off. Or maybe there are too many changes to track. I use scissors to cut-up sections and tape “chunks” of text together in a new way. This can permit me to literally see where something is missing; there is a gap in the text. It might be a missing chunk of story or something smaller, a transition of sorts. I make a note: “bridge line(s) needed” to come back to later. When I can see the way a story might be coming together, I create equations in the margins of the text, like this:  B + bridge line(s) + A + MISSING CHUNK + the right last line(s). 

The process of writing a short story is like deliberately entering and resolving a new and troubling dream. Finding a way in and out of so many distinct worlds is both exhilarating and disorienting. I become immersed in writing each new story, and every moment is filtered through that work in progress. Experience shows me this season is only temporary.

When writing my collection, this list called “What I Like About Writing” hangs on my office wall: 1. learning something. 2. surprising myself with thoughts. 3. drinking my coffee. 4. getting at the heart of something. 5. coming out safe on the other side. What thoughts am I willing to hold, crack-open, write down?

One story in my collection is told in first person, from the point of view of a narcissistic young man who is a hoarder. A few writer friends tell me, about an early draft: I can’t believe you wrote that. What do they mean?  How could someone as nice as I seem to be think these thoughts? Yes. Because when my character deals with addiction and an inflated ego, I am required to conjure and expose some of my own personal darkness.

As a short story writer, I allow my imagination to surprise and challenge me, even if it makes me uncomfortable. The risk is worth the discovery. It is authentic work to be courageous, and my delight to imagine deep within and far beyond myself.

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Mayer's cover image for We Will Tell You Otherwise

BETH MAYER’S short story collection WE WILL TELL YOU OTHERWISE won the 2017 Hudson Prize with Black Lawrence Press (forthcoming August 2019). Her fiction has appeared in The Threepenny ReviewThe Sun Magazine, and The Midway Review. She was a fiction finalist for The Missouri Review’s Jeffrey E. Smith Editors’ Prize (2016), her work recognized among “Other Distinguished Stories” by Best American Mystery Stories (2010), and her stories anthologized in both American Fiction (New Rivers) and New Stories from the Midwest (Ohio University).

Mayer was a Loft Mentor Series Winner in Fiction (2015-16) and holds an MFA in creative writing from Hamline University. She currently teaches English at Century College in Minnesota, where she lives with her family and impossibly faithful dog. Visit her online at https://bethmayer.com/

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Watch for an author Q&A with Beth Mayer on August 21st
and a chance to win a copy of WE WILL TELL YOU OTHERWISE!

Q&A: Julie Zuckerman, author of The Book of Jeremiah

“Now it came to her, how to describe the country in one word: resilient. Despite wars and destruction, the people here continually moved forward, rebuilding and innovating. Resilience might also be the quality needed for a lasting marriage, the ability to sort through problems and come out stronger.” ~ from The Book of Jeremiah


In life and writing, no character lives in isolation. Every action and reaction moves us forward in one way or another, strengthening ties or breaking bonds. It is only in looking back where we may fully understand the course of our journey, the impact we have on others, the impact they have on us.

Zuckerman, cover image for The Book of Jeremiah, silhouette of man's profile nested several times.

From the title, The Book of Jeremiah (Press 53, 2019), you might assume Julie Zuckerman’s debut novel is solely the story of one man. But this novel in stories opens with “A Strong Hand and an Outstretched Arm,” as told from Jeremiah’s mother’s point of view, and sets the tone for all that follows: a journey through past and present, revealing all that makes the man.

Anna Solomon (The Little Bride) says, “These stories shimmer with tenderness and truth.” Ilana Kurshan (If All the Seas Were Ink) calls Zuckerman’s novel “a sensitive and nuanced portrayal of some of life’s most painful and private moments.” The book’s cover speaks to the power of Zuckerman’s novel: this is a multi-generational story in which everyone is connected, by blood and experience, in history and in culture, through cause and effect.

I’m honored to host Julie Zuckerman today to talk more about her novel. ENTER the book giveaway for a chance to win a copy of The Book of Jeremiah (courtesy of Caitlin Hamilton Marketing & Publicity and Press 53).


Christi Craig (CC): You have a great collection of short stories and essays published, and The Book of Jeremiah is your first longer work. What did you love most about moving from short to long, and did you find certain themes carried over into your novel?

Julie Zuckerman

Julie Zuckerman (JZ): My idea was to write each chapter as a particular moment in Jeremiah’s life, every story meant to stand on its own and contribute to the larger arc – the best of both worlds! “Each life an entire universe” is something Jeremiah contemplates in one of the chapters, when he’s thinking about soldiers who have died in America’s various wars, and that’s a bit like what I tried to do here, to capture the entire universe that is his life.

Several themes emerged as I wrote: loss and forgiveness, sorrow and hope, the search for one’s place in the world. Certain questions also recur in the various chapters: Can you ever truly know another person? I wasn’t consciously writing towards these themes and questions, but I suppose it’s natural that if you look at the course of one person’s life, there are central motifs that repeat themselves.

CC: In “A note from the Author,” you write that this book grew from the final story in the novel, “MixMaster.” From there you “worked…to unravel Jeremiah’s life.” What was the biggest challenge, or most surprising moment (or both) in uncovering this character, along with his family?

JZ: “MixMaster” takes place when Jeremiah is 82, so I was writing backwards in time, having a pretty good idea of who he was as a senior, but less clear on who he was as a young man, as a child. One of the pivotal moments in Jeremiah’s life occurs when he is 19; I won’t reveal what it is here, but it was fun writing about the youthful Jeremiah. He’s a bit of a wild child, a prankster as a youth, so it surprised me to see some of the tricks he had up his sleeve.

CC: On your website, you feature Fun Stuff, including recipes for dishes mentioned in the book, paired with quotes from the book. What a great mix of media to enhance the readers’ experience of your novel. Which is your favorite recipe to make and share?

JZ: Thanks! I had a good time making that page, and I may add more recipes as I go along.

In terms of recipes I like to make and share, it’s a three-way tie between homemade granola, chocolate chip peanut butter cookies (from the Mrs. Fields “I Love Chocolate! Cookbook” – a variation of the recipe is here), and cinnamon babka. Special shout-out to Paula Shoyer, aka The Kosher Baker, for teaching my daughter how to make babka at summer camp and then sending the kids home with recipe books. One of her other babka recipes is available here.

Here’s the homemade granola recipe, which I received from a family friend:

Zuckerman recipes, jar of granola next to a bowl full of granola with banana slices

6 cups rolled oats
2 cups whole almonds or mixed nuts
(not salted or roasted) ¾ cup hazelnuts ½ cup flax seeds ½ cup sunflower seeds ½ cup pumpkin seeds ¼ cup brown sugar 3 tsp ground allspice 2 tsp ground cinnamon 1 tsp ground ginger ¾ cup olive oil 4 TBSP honey 2 cups pitted dates, chopped 1 cup dried unsweetened cranberries

Mix the first ten ingredients in a large bowl. Heat olive oil and honey in a saucepan over low heat, then pour it over the granola mixture and stir well. Spread mixture over 1-2 baking sheets, bake at 300 for 15 minutes, stirring once or twice. Stir in the dried fruit and continue baking for another 10-15 minutes. Cool and store in an airtight container. Delicious with yogurt and fresh fruit, or any way you like to eat granola!

CC: What are you reading these days?

JZ: I’ve been alternating reading short story collections, particularly from small presses like Press 53 – they are all excellent! – and novels, with a few memoirs here and there. A few that I’ve read lately and would highly recommend are “Heirlooms” by Rachel Hall, “Ways to Disappear” by Idra Novey, “The Art of Leaving” by Ayelet Tsabari, “Shelf-Life of Happiness” by Virginia Pye, “They Could Live With Themselves” by Jodi Paloni, “What the Zhang Boys Knew” by Cliff Garstang, “The Parting Gift” by Evan Fallenberg and “A Good Hard Look” by Ann Napolitano.

CC: May is Short Story Month. With that in mind, along with the knowledge that your novel grew from a short story, is there a collection of stories you would recommend for readers or a short story author you love most?

JZ: In addition to the above, I’d recommend anything by Edith Pearlman (author of “Binocular Vision,” “Honeydew” and several other volumes). Is it too much to say that I’d like to be her when I grow up?

Julie Zuckerman’s fiction and nonfiction have appeared in a variety of publications, including The SFWP Quarterly, The MacGuffin, Salt Hill, Sixfold, Crab Orchard Review, Ellipsis, The Coil, and others. THE BOOK OF JEREMIAH, her debut novel-in-stories, was the runner-up in the 2018 Press 53 Award for Short Fiction Award. A native of Connecticut, she resides in Modiin, Israel, with her husband and four children. Learn more at https://www.juliezuckerman.com/.


DON’T FORGET! Enter the giveaway by noon, May 28th,
for a chance to win a copy of The Book of Jeremiah.

Guest Post: Octavia Cade on the Power of Food

In my early twenties, I read Margaret Atwood’s The Handmaid’s Tale, her most famous book. Later, I read one of her a lesser known novels, The Edible Woman, about Marian McAlprin, a young woman engaged to be married who finds herself suddenly at war with food. For good reason. Food becomes the metaphor for Marian’s realization how she is being consumed, piece by piece, as she moves closer to her marriage.

“What fiendishness went on in kitchens across the country, in the name of providing food!” ~ from The Edible Woman, by Margaret Atwood

I can’t remember every detail about this book, but the impression it left on me has never waned. I closed that cover after the last page and looked at the world in a different way–more awake and perhaps a little more suspicious. You might question the benefit of suspicion, but you can never question the power of a story that keeps you thinking, for years after.

Food: overhead shot of empty plates, empty glasses

Food plays a role in many stories and novels. Food is a comfort, a necessity, sometimes a source of power. Which is what Octavia Cade writes about today, as she introduces us to a new anthology of short stories on food (and horror) that she has edited, Sharp & Sugar Tooth: Women Up to No Good (Upper Rubber Boot Books, 2019).

Photo credit: ollycoffey on VisualHunt / CC BY-NC

May is Short Story Month. In honor of short stories and Octavia’s post, I’m hosting a giveaway of Sharp & Sugar Tooth (courtesy of her and Upper Rubber Boot Books). ENTER the GIVEAWAY by Sunday, May 26th, for a change to win an ebook version. Now, welcome Octavia Cade!


On food as power...cover image of Sharp & Sugar Tooth: Woman biting into sharp object, blood in her teeth

OCTAVIA CADE: The Sharp and Sugar Tooth is an anthology of feminist food and horror stories from Upper Rubber Boot Books, published earlier this year. 

There’s something intrinsically horrifying about food. Something wonderful, too, but the horror’s there still, bubbling away underneath. I’ve been thinking about food and horror for several years now, and the conclusion I’ve come to is that the horror results from a relationship that, at bottom, is basically about power. 

We need food to live. Oh, we can survive without it for a little, and there’s plenty of horror in starvation narratives – what we’ll eat when there’s no other choice, trapped by winter like the Donner party, trapped by glaciers or shipwreck – but for the most part, it’s eat or die. And we skim over the surface of this, pushing our abattoirs out of sight, packaging our food so that by the time it gets to the supermarket there’s little visible reminder of where it came from. It’s just groceries, and any idea that killing’s been done to get it is swept away. It’s someone else’s responsibility. Someone else bulldozed the rainforest to make way for farm, someone else dumped dolphin overboard with the rest of the bycatch, someone else heard those animals screaming in their slaughter pens.

It was never us.

Except it was, and that exertion of power over the natural environment becomes social exertion when that food comes into the home. Who cooks it, who serves it, who cleans up afterwards? It’s a subtler exploitation than slaughterhouses, but it’s there nonetheless, embedded in the history of housework, the weight of expectation. When it comes to food, let’s face it: most of the responsibility has fallen on women. Whether they’re out in the fields, or circling between stove and sink, theirs is the business of consumption. Of providing that which is meant to be consumed.

It’s not as if this is a new (or even an isolated) phenomenon. There’s a long and unpretty relationship between women and consumption, where the one is packaged up for the other and that, too, has expectation and exploitation wound all through it. Consumption is, after all, a catch-all phrase, a metaphor that can be used for any number of things. It’s the places of overlap I find most interesting, though, and the subversions that overlap can bring. Because food is so much about power, you’d think more of it would rest with those who provided it. I mean, if you’re the one stuck in the kitchen making sandwiches, because no-one else will do it, who’s to say what those sandwiches will look like? What power they’ll have, what consequences they’ll bring.

hands wearing black gloves holding a burger

This is a fertile ground for a horror anthology. I’m not the only one to think so. When Joanne from Upper Rubber Boot Books took this project on I expected, in the submissions period, to get a lot of stories that bubbled up with resentment and revenge, with the retaking of power. Cannibalism was a popular theme. At least half of the stories submitted involved eating a husband or boyfriend, with the clear implication that they deserved it – that they, too, were objects to be consumed, the feeding point of power. Clearly I’d hit a nerve. And yet the stories I ended up taking explored that intersection between food and women and power in often subtler ways. 

A surprising amount were genuinely hopeful, compassionate pieces of writing. Hope and compassion isn’t something that turns up a lot in horror writing. I mean, I like gore as much as the next girl, but when I go looking for feminist horror stories, I think I want more range than just last-girl-standing, more than women-can-be-terrible-consumers-too although these are attractive narratives and there’s some wonderful, deeply creepy examples of them in The Sharp and Sugar Tooth. But I want as well women who recognise horror for what it is and help each other navigate it, who can be their own heroes, who find in their fields and kitchens and friendships a way to use the power of that necessity-relationship to benefit both themselves and others. In “Strong Meat”, by A.R. Henle, for example, food is the fulcrum for choice, for helping another person to get the confidence to speak out and advocate for themselves. In Erin Horáková’s “A Year Without the Taste of Meat”, human body parts are used in a grief ritual that draws mourners together, even when they otherwise might be at odds. And in “I Eat” by H. Pueyo, the aftermath of apocalypse forces the characters to make choices in their consumption that will benefit, rather than harm, the struggling ecosystem around them.

There’s range in the horror here, is what I’m saying. Diverse viewpoints, diverse experiences of consumption. Survival and subversion and some black humour, even; explorations of ecosystems and social networks, expectation and exploitation. I’m biased, of course, but even so I’m sure you’ll find some tasty things here.

Octavia Cade is the author of the award-winning non-fiction essay collection Food and Horror, and is the editor of the food horror anthology The Sharp and Sugar Tooth from Upper Rubber Boot Books. Her stories have appeared in Clarkesworld, Shimmer, and Strange Horizons, amongst others, and she has a poetry collection coming soon from Aqueduct Press. She attended Clarion West 2016, and will be the 2020 writer-in-residence at Massey University in New Zealand.  

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