Writing in the Bahamas

imageThis time last week, I was wearing flip flops and my swimsuit and sitting at a picnic table with professionals from the publishing world. Folks who know their business inside and out. People like big-wig editors and well-known agents and best-selling authors.

I’m not bragging.

What I mean to say is that normally if a person were lucky enough to find herself in the presence of this audience, she might put on something more than sunscreen.

Okay, there was a swimsuit cover-up. But in the Bahamas, one can’t worry about her wardrobe (or her hair for that matter).

So, I left my heels behind and lugged notebooks and manuscripts around instead. I whittled down the lead in my pencil filling pages with notes from the Salt Cay Writers Retreat: tips on the craft heard from speakers on the panels, words of advice from my one-on-one, and ideas and insights gathered during workshop, even when it wasn’t my piece in the spotlight.

We took breaks, mind you, because it was impossible to ignore blue ocean waters just yards away. But even when I walked the beach or rocked back and forth in the waves, I was thinking through story, considering character and strategy, imagining the setting of the cold, north woods while basking under the burning, tropical sun.

It is possible.

And that was one of the biggest gifts from this retreat: the possibility of this novel that I’ve dreamed of and pushed aside and worried about and picked up again.

My notes are linear but disorganized, but I can’t wait to share more with you. And I will, bit by bit.

Where did you find possibility this week?

Soaking it all in.
Soaking it all in.

Q&A with Susanna Daniel, author of Sea Creatures

The Course of a life will shift–really shift–many times over the years. But rarely will there be a shift that you can feel gathering in the distance like a storm, rarely will you notice the pressure drop before the skies open.
~ from Sea Creatures


Change is inevitable.
 But even when you make way for it, you can’t possibly know how things will unfold.

SeaCreaturesNew_264x400In Susanna Daniel’s second novel, Sea Creatures, Georgia Quillian and her husband Graham, along with their young son, set out for new beginnings when they uproot themselves from Illinois and move into a dated  houseboat docked in the bay outside of Miami.

Daniel sets the tone for the novel in the first paragraph when Georgia says, “what worries us most–pedophiles, kidnappers, dog attacks–is least likely to happen, while what is most likely is some unimagined event.”  What follows is a quiet, yet powerful, story about relationships and parenting and the risks we take to save ourselves and those we love.

I’m honored to host Susanna Daniel today for a quick Q&A about her book and writing. Drop your name in the comments for a chance to win a copy of Sea Creatures. It’s an easy giveaway for an excellent read. Random.org will choose the winner on Tuesday, October 29th.

Now welcome, Susanna Daniel!

CC: In Sea Creatures, you return to the small community of stilt houses built off the shores of Miami that was also the setting of your first novel, the award-winning Stiltsville. What is it about this particular place that draws you back again?

sd_color_3_med-150x150SD: It’s funny, because I had in mind that I was not allowed, for some reason, to write again about Stiltsville — so for a time I didn’t. I wrote about people in South Florida, in similar circumstances as those in Sea Creatures, and I held Stiltsville underwater, so to speak, so it couldn’t distract me. But I kept veering to the place, checking in on it in my mind. And the book I was writing wasn’t coalescing.

So one day I told my husband, who is not a fiction writer, that I was frustrated because I couldn’t shake the desire to return to Stiltsvlle — and he was like, “Then why don’t you?” I told him my notion that I wasn’t allowed, and he told me this was–simply put–stupid.

Stiltsville is an island, essentially, and when you have characters placed on an island, something is bound to happen. I also wanted badly to return to Stiltsville to explore the storyline of a character who is introduced very briefly in my first novel, the Hermit. The Hermit lives at Stiltsville full-time — he is modeled after a real person — so his every interaction is fraught with the bit of danger and escapism of living in the middle of the bay.

CC: As I read Sea Creatures, and later wrote these questions, I couldn’t stop thinking about “recklessness,” the way the characters risk their own lives and those of the people they love. I’m speaking mostly of Graham and the danger poised at the edges of his sleeping disorder. But, in some ways, Georgia is reckless herself, ultimately putting her son in harm’s way. Throughout the novel, I sympathized with both Graham and Georgia and worried about their decisions just the same (meaning, readers can’t help but become invested in the characters!). What was your biggest challenge in writing Graham’s and Georgia’s stories?

SD: My biggest challenge was how to convey to readers that Georgia and Graham used to be happy and in love, like any other couple (except for the sleep disorders, of course), and so even as the story opens, there’s already an incredible loss. They are on shaky ground and making the best decisions they can under the circumstances.

Also, I think it’s amazing the risks people will take in a certain situation that they think they never would outside of that situation–Georgia is an anxious mother, but she’s also an adventurous person and wants her son to experience life. In her mind, it’s other people who are being reckless–until, of course, she’s forced to come to terms with her own questionable decisions.

CC: You recently founded the Madison Writers’ Studio with author, Michelle Wildgen, teaching creative writing classes in Madison, WI. You have some great course offerings, from Fiction I to a class called “Novel in a Year.” What inspired you to start the Studio, and what is your long-term vision?

SD: I’ve long wanted to return to teaching in a workshop setting–it’s a passion of mine. I had a hunch Michelle might be feeling the same way. Everywhere I go, people tell me they want to write–novels, stories, memoirs. My good friend Julia Fierro founded the terrific Sackett Street Writer’s Workshop in Brooklyn ten years ago, which inspired me. I looked around for similar offerings in the Madison area, and found nothing. So I thought, Why not? Michelle is the perfect partner. Our first workshops are almost finished, and I couldn’t be happier with how they’ve gone.

Long term, I’d like to open a work space for writers, with a membership program for people looking for a space outside the home to write without distraction.

CC: What are you reading these days?

SD: I’m reading NIGHT FILM and ENON — both exciting books, but in completely different ways.

Susanna Daniel’s debut novel, Stiltsville, was awarded the PEN/Bingham prize for best debut work published in 2010, and her second novel, Sea Creatures, was named an Amazon Editors’ Top Pick of the Best Books of August, 2013. Susanna is a co-founder, with author Michelle Wildgen, of the Madison Writers’ Studio. She is a graduate of Columbia University and the University of Iowa Writers’ Workshop, and was a Carl Djerassi Fiction Fellow at the University of Wisconsin Institute for Creative Writing. Her writing has been published in Newsweek, Slate, One Story, Epoch, and elsewhere. Visit her website or follow her on Facebook and Twitter.

Remember: drop your name in the comments for a chance to win Sea Creatures!

When Writing and Real Life Intersect: Guest Post by Trish Ryan

I’ve written before about my belief in a Power greater than myself that helps me  maneuver through life. And, writing (no plea is too silly). I’m not alone. When it comes to writing, plenty of authors talk about a spiritual nature that took them from here to there and well beyond their imagination. Today I welcome Trish Ryan, author of the memoir, He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not, who tells us a little about her journey and her encounters with that “still small voice” (or, not so small as it may be).

My Journey from Dreaming to Doing

author-pic-1-for-websiteI didn’t always want to be a writer. In college, a professor thought I’d make a good lawyer, and I grabbed that vision and ran with it.

A few years later, I was a litigation associate at a mid-sized firm in Philadelphia, defending grocery stores against plaintiffs who’d injured themselves slipping on produce. I wasn’t clear why I was doing this, and billing my time in six-minute increments made me so miserable I could barely face Mondays.

I left law to pursue a graduate degree, but soon had a chance to work for a bestselling author. That’s where I learned what life as an author looks like, how it doesn’t have to be long hours sequestered in some garret, perfecting the prose; it can be capturing sentences whenever they occur, letting the world wait a moment while you jot down an idea. That, I could do.

I jotted my own sentences on restaurant napkins and odd pieces of paper. The trouble was, I had lots of ideas about how life works, but no story. Good writing is about what happens when our ideas intersect with real life. For that, I had to to wait.

A few years later, I was at a family funeral, driving down the road feeling pitiful, thinking about my cousins and their amazing families. I’d tried and failed repeatedly at romance, and wondered if I’d ever make it work.  At a stoplight, I heard a voice in my head that sounded (don’t laugh!) like James Earl Jones. He said, “I have more for you. I have a husband for you, a family…everything you want. But you need to take Jesus seriously.” It’s a sign of how unhappy I was that my response wasn’t surprise or questions, but simply, “Well, okay. If it’ll help…”

I was fairly sure no one else in Cambridge, Massachusetts was taking Jesus seriously; I figured I’d need to move to Nashville or Tulsa, get some high hair and some awkward-looking clothes. But if it would improve my chances to build a happy life, I was willing to try.

Then a friend told me about a church our city where there were real Christians. The next Sunday I went, feeling like an anthropologist observing a rare tribe that has wandered from its habitat. I was surprised: by the smart, friendly people, by a sermon that made sense, and by how I felt when I left: hopeful, like a small door was opening and I wanted to walk through and see what was on the other side.

On the other side, it turns out, was my husband. Now I had a story. I decided to write a book to encourage women that God cares about our romantic lives.

As I wrote, I studied the publishing industry: Did I need an agent? How should a book proposal be structured? What would make my query letter compelling? I spent hours pouring over author and agent websites, learning how to give my project legs in this business.

I picked an agent to query – I’d read and liked two books by authors she represented. She didn’t typically take on spiritual titles, but she’d just had lunch with an editor who’d said, “I’m looking for something like Eat, Pray, Love, only Jesus-ey…”

That editor bought the project, and helped me shape He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not: A Memoir of Finding Faith, Hope & Happily Ever After into a book that appeals to readers of all faiths (or none at all). Two years later, I published A Maze of Grace: A Memoir of Second Chances, about figuring out how to live into this idea of happily ever after.

Now, I have a bigger dream: a bookstore shelf filled with books written by me and others, each sharing stories of what happens when you believe more is possible in life than circumstances might suggest.

We just put out a new edition of He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not, and it includes a preview of my new project, The Courage to Ask: Thoughts on Praying for A Husband. In all of this, moving from dreaming to doing still comes down to what I learned working for that author all those years ago: grab ideas and write them down when they occur. Let the words and the work pile up in small segments, day after day, then see how they weave together. Learn and adapt as you go. Push through until you type, The End. This is how dreams become reality.

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Trish Ryan is an author, speaker, and writing consultant. She lives outside Boston, Massachusetts with her husband Steve and their genetically improbable mixed-breed dog, Kylie. She is the author of two memoirs about the intersection between the search for the right guy and the right God.  You can connect with Trish via her website, www.Trishryanauthor.com, on Facebook (Trish-Ryan-Author) or Twitter: @Trishryan.

He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not is available for purchase HERE on Amazon.